Sunday, September 8, 2013

More Than Just A Kiss.....

I'm thrilled to be taking part in this fantastic blogfest!  It's on all week, so you should join in too. It's so simple, and there are prizes involved!  You can win books from a whole raft of wonderful writers.

The rules are simple:
1. Sign up on the linky list and post the badge on your blog.
2. On one of the days of the week of September 9th, post a kissing scene on your blog. It can be either fiction or non-fiction.
3. Please do not exceed 250 words.
4. This is a blogfest, so visit the other participants and have fun!
So here's my kissing excerpt from my WIP which is untitled at the moment, so I've been referring to it as #juvvielesbian.

I could barely see her.  Only the whites of her eyes caught the light.  And her teeth, when she smiled.


“You’re crazy, you know that?”  Kiri laughed.  “I thought you were going to punch me back there.”
“Well, it was either that, or this…”

I stepped forward and put my arms around her waist, drawing her closer to me, pressing her hips into mine.  Her eyes glittered in the starlight as I leaned in to kiss her.

Her lips were cool and smooth.  When I ran my tongue across them, I caught the sweetness of her watermelon lip-gloss.  She pulled me closer, pushing her mouth to mine with an urgency that spiked my heart rate.  Her breasts were soft and full and heavy against my chest.  I longed to touch them, to cup them in my palms.  Warmth spread through me and made my legs grow liquid.

With our mouths still exploring, we dropped to our knees on the pine needles, not noticing the sharp points as they dug into our bare legs. Her hands roved over my body.  She caressed the dip of my waist and followed its line downward, tracing the swell of my hip.  I mirrored her movements, finding the lean, hard parts of Kiri, and the softer ones.

The owl hooted again, much closer to us this time. I pulled back.
“That’s gotta be better than a black eye.”  Her teeth were so white they hung like ghosts in the darkness.
I smiled back.  “I reckon.”

Now, go pop around the other blogs and see what other kisses you can find....


  1. The watermelon lip glass was a great sensory detail to add in because it covers sight, taste, and smell. nicely done.

  2. "...better than a black eye"? I should hope so, LOL.

    Good scene!

  3. Pretty hot action going on there! :-)

  4. A lot of kissing in the blogosphere! Nice scene Kate!

  5. I wonder what the better than a black eye is about, the kiss or something else? Nice throw of passion here. :)

  6. Black eye? oooh interesting.

    Nice attention to detail in this scene, very well written!

  7. Great scene! The tension is intense and passion hot. Well done. Thank you for participating in the blogfest.

  8. Great scene, the owl hooting - the scene is set.

  9. Yep, better than a black eye for sure. :) Nice excerpt.

  10. So many good things about this snippet.

  11. Liking the idea of mirroring her movements and how it's not something I've read in a kissing scene before. Gotta love original details like that.

  12. Brilliant kissing scene, very sweet, but still passionate!

  13. Great sweet, yet sensual kiss. Love the sensory Details-which is very important especially when two People are kissing. :)Thanks for sharing and taking part in the blogfest.