Friday, August 26, 2016



This post is part of Lexa Cain's bloghop, Celebrate the Small Things. Head on over there to join up!

So what am I celebrating this week?

It's been a busy week, but I've managed to get through a lot of what I wanted to achieve.  I'm more than halfway through my revision of My Murder Year and hope to be completely done with it by the end of next week.  They were all relatively small changes, so it isn't a huge revision, if you're wondering how I've managed to get through it so fast.

One of my sons is going to a birthday party tomorrow and staying the night with his friend, so I have some one-on-one time with my older son.  It's pretty rare that we get that, so I'm looking forward to it.

It's Friday and I have wine!  That's always something to celebrate.

What are you celebrating this week?


Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Books I've Read - Those Girls

I'm changing this weekly column because I have loved far too few books recently to be able to sustain a weekly column called 'Books I've Loved'.  Plus, by including books I didn't love, I can talk about the reasons why these books didn't really do it for me…

So, without further ado, here's one I didn't love.


This book was a little like a car wreck.  It was horrible, but I couldn't stop reading it.  There are four points of view, all girls, and each one more despicable than the last.  It's difficult to understand how these four characters became friends in the first place, let alone how they managed to remain friends right through high school.  I know there is such thing as 'frenemies', but these girls take the concept to the extreme!

I never thought I'd be one of those people who claimed there was too much sex in a YA book, but here we are…  Or maybe it isn't that there's too much sex, but that it's such nasty sex.  No one seems to be doing it because they actually like the guy they're having it with.  Except Alex, maybe, and she winds up having sex with one of her so-called friends' boyfriends.  So still not really ideal for anyone.  There's also a truly awkward threesome.

But my biggest issue is with the ending.  I won't give it away in case anyone wants to read this book, but the girls' plan to humiliate their friend (yes, shady idea in the first place) is just stupid.  And the consequences are worse, but get pretty much swept under the rug before the book's conclusion.

So I wouldn't recommend this one.  The characters are awful people and spending the length of the book with them is unpleasant.  I really hope high school girls don't behave this way because if they do, my sons are on house arrest until they're twenty.  At least.

But don't just listen to me.  Here's the blurb:

Some girls will always have your back, and some girls can't help but stab you in it.

Junior year, the suburbs of Philadelphia. Alex, Mollie and Veronica are those girls: they're the best of friends and the party girls of the school. But how well does everybody know them--and really, how well do they know one another? Alex is secretly in love with the boy next door and has joined a band--without telling anyone. Mollie suffers from a popular (and possibly sociopathic) boyfriend, as well as a serious mean streak. And Veronica just wants to be loved--literally, figuratively, physically....she's not particular. Will this be the year that bonds them forever....or tears them apart for good?

Lauren Saft masterfully conveys what goes on in the mind of a teenage girl, and her debut novel is raw, honest, hilarious, and thought-provoking, with a healthy dose of heart.

Monday, August 22, 2016

Weekly Goals 22-8-16

As I suspected, I got some notes on My Murder Year from my agent toward the end of last week, so Sam and Amy will have to go on the back burner while I address those.  Luckily the notes are all very minor things, so I hope to be able to knock that work out over the course of the week, so next week I can get back into the forest with my two lost souls…

And that's about it for goals this week.  Lots to do at work, so it's going to be a busy one.

What are your goals this week?


Friday, August 19, 2016

Celebrate the Small Things 19-8-16



This post is part of Lexa Cain's bloghop, Celebrate the Small Things. Head on over there to join up!

So what am I celebrating this week?

It's one of those weeks when it's difficult to find things to celebrate, a week where one piece of bad news follows another.  But this bloghop isn't called 'Whinge About The Things Outside Your Control', so I won't go into the various tragedies that have punctuated my week.

We're supposed to be celebrating and no matter how terrible things get, if you look hard enough, there is always something to celebrate.

I have revised 18 chapters of Sam and Amy.  The terrible section I thought dragged the whole middle of the book down turned out to be much shorter than I remember it being, and much less draggy.  I feel like it's still a little too long at 3 chapters, but it's better than the five I had before.  And once I finish the rest of the book, I think I may be able to go back and cut that down even further.  I'm not sure Sam needs to articulate so much of his story.  Amy does, because what she says in this section is crucial to things that happen later in the book, but I think a lot of Sam's stuff can probably get folded into other places.  Maybe.

And…  Well, I'll celebrate cake.  The accountant at work had a birthday this week and we got to eat some particularly delicious cake.

What are you celebrating this week?