An Unstill Life

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Sunday, October 19, 2014

Spooky Halloween read... On Sale!

My amazing CP's book is on sale for Halloween!  Until October 18th, you can get this fantastic YA Horror for just .99 cents!  I really can't endorse this book enough.  It's creepy and imaginative and so fast paced it will leave you breathless at times.  Plus it's set in Egypt which makes it that little bit different to so many other horror novels.

So, if you like a good, scary read to get your heart pumping, for less than a dollar, you can pick it up now.  What are you waiting for?

Buy links: 

Friday, October 17, 2014

Celebrate the Small Things 17-10-14

This post is part of VikLit's blog hop, Celebrate the Small Things. Head on over there to join up! 

So, what am I celebrating this week?

Writing!  I've dug out an old project and am re-working it with the help of my critique group.  As a result of my CP's first chapter crit, I've written a whole new opening to the book - one that works much better.  So I'm excited to keep going with this story now.

I read a fantastic book this week, one of those books that just stays with you after you've read it.  If you haven't already read OCD LOVE STORY, I really can't recommend it any more highly.  It delves deeply into the mind of a girl with OCD and being there is often painfully uncomfortable.  But it's also totally compelling.  When I got to the last third of the book, I really didn't want to stop reading.  It was like a car crash you see coming but can't do anything to stop.

The kids went back to school after a two weeks off.  I'm celebrating not having to find things for them to do every day, but definitely not celebrating the whole getting-them-off in the morning.

What are you celebrating this week?

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Adventure on Nemesis Mountain

I'm really excited to be able to introduce you to this new book by Annie McMahon.  I met Annie in my first critique group, and this book was the first of hers I read.  So it's a huge thrill to see it finally in print, and to help her out with her blog tour.

When nature-loving Emilio and athletic Hans get lost in the forest during a fifth grade field trip, they have no choice but to put their differences aside to survive the harsh wilderness.

Emilio would rather eat a slimy worm than miss the fifth grade field trip. Nemesis Mountain must be full of rare leaf specimens and bugs for his collection. Besides, he needs a break from the playground and Hans’s nonstop teasing. His excitement is squashed when he gets lost in the woods with his worst enemy.
Alone in the forest, the two boys battle to survive the harsh wilderness, facing challenges that will change their lives forever.

About the Author

Annie McMahon is originally from Canada but now lives in New Jersey. She has a degree in computer programming, but her life took an unexpected turn and she ended up writing stories and articles instead of computer programs. Now she uses every spare minute to write children’s novels and to help other writers succeed.

Her three children have been the inspiration behind many of her short stories, over forty in total. Her flash fiction story, Paradoxical Neighbor, has been published by Nelson Education in a book for 10th graders, Nelson Literacy 10.

Annie has a certificate in copyediting, moderates a critique group for children's writers, and is the editor at UK Children's Publishing.

Twitter: @anniemcmahon20
Goodreads: Annie McMahon
Author page on Amazon:  Annie’s author page

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Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Why we need CPs.

I've been working on an older story of mine this week.  Just pottering around with it, trying to make it work.  And because I'm not sure it is working, I started posting the chapters I've finished tinkering with up for my critique group to tear apart.

I got my first piece of feedback on my first chapter yesterday, and it was 100% spot on.

My CP pointed out that I was opening my story too soon.  That by starting my book with someone sitting in front of a computer, bored by his homework, I was going to start the book by boring the reader.  Even though the inciting incident happens in this chapter, that first scene wasn't going to compel anyone to read on.

She then said that while the inciting incident is good, it happens too soon for the reader to care.  That she needed to know the character a little better before he had his world rocked.

I agree.

I'm usually accused of having opening chapters in which nothing much happens because I always like to let the reader meet the characters and get a feeling for their world before throwing the crap at them.  With this story I'd decided forego that and jump right into the action.  I should have trusted my usual storytelling instincts.

So I went back and wrote a new chapter one last night.  Not an enormous amount happens in it, but I think by the end of it you know Tony a lot better, and have some idea of the struggles he's going to face  as the book goes on.

Having good critique partners is essential.  I can't stress that more.  You need readers you trust, readers who aren't going to be afraid of hurting your feelings if they think your work stinks.  You also need to be ready for critique, ready to accept that your work isn't as flawless as you'd like to think.

But more on that next time...

Do you have critique partners you trust?

Sunday, October 12, 2014

Weekly Goals 13-10-14

It's been a while since I did this, so I may be a little rusty...

I'm still sort of on a writing break.  I figure there's not a lot of point in starting something new now, when I want to do NaNo, so I'm just doodling around with an older project while I try to figure out what my NaNo book is going to be.

I have several ideas for NaNo.  Two are things I've already started and not finished, and four are all new ideas.  I know I'm going to be under pressure at work in November because my assistant manager is leaving.  So I need to make sure whatever project I choose to go with is one I'm going to be able to write reasonably easily (as if writing a book is ever easy).

I think I've pretty much narrowed it down to two choices: a story I've been trying to write for years and never managed to get quite right, and something new, based on an experience my boss had late last year.  If I can't decide between them, I may work on both through November.  I always like to have two projects on the go because if I get stuck on one, I can work on the other until I get un-stuck.

Are you doing NaNo this year?  Do you know what you're going to write?

Friday, October 10, 2014

Celebrate the Small Things 10-10-14

This post is part of VikLit's blog hop, Celebrate the Small Things. Head on over there to join up! 

So, what am I celebrating this week?

I've enjoyed my little blogging break, but I'm glad to be back.  It's amazing how a couple of weeks away can revitalize you.  I have lots of ideas of things to blog about now, and I'm looking forward to getting started on my NaNo project... Assuming I can decide which of my 5 ideas to go with.

My kids have been on vacation for a couple of weeks, and it's been nice to spend some time with them.  I've had a few extra days off work to do this, and you'd better believe I've appreciated them.

I've been doing a lot of reading the past couple of weeks (amazing how much more time to read I have when I'm not trying to write 2K a day).  I'm also guilty of watching far more television than is probably healthy... 

What are you celebrating this week?

Tuesday, September 30, 2014


It appears I have inadvertently taken a wee blogging break along with my writing break....  Apologies.  I have been very busy relaxing (or trying to), and forgot all about blogging.  But in a way, it feels right to take a break here too.  I feel like my blog posts of late have been dull and uninteresting, and I hope to find some fodder for more scintillating blogs while I am away...

At this stage I'm giving myself 2 weeks off, but I know what I'm like and know that taking that time might make me snaky.  But let's aim for a return to the blog at the end of next week.

Have a great couple of weeks!