tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post7573926793980059914..comments2024-03-28T04:07:58.140-07:00Comments on Fiction and Film: Kissy Kissy...Kate Larkindalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-55973511545724789052013-02-06T19:04:11.155-08:002013-02-06T19:04:11.155-08:00Honestly, I LOVE that you did a same-sex kissing s...Honestly, I LOVE that you did a same-sex kissing scene. It was hot and messy and wonderful. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-29275150209762408622013-02-05T13:44:05.841-08:002013-02-05T13:44:05.841-08:00Love this scene! It's hot and confused and ama...Love this scene! It's hot and confused and amazing. <3<br /><br />Larissa (#47)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-32644700497880507672013-02-05T13:36:02.872-08:002013-02-05T13:36:02.872-08:00I though the line with "songs of ecstasy alon...I though the line with "songs of ecstasy along my spine" was great. And I especially liked the part about kissing Jesse.<br /><br />Good luck!<br />Laura, Kiss #33, BSD #112Laura Rueckerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12267281174937559086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-72888260338656838252013-02-05T09:07:45.161-08:002013-02-05T09:07:45.161-08:00This is so sweet! I love it, especially the line a...This is so sweet! I love it, especially the line about the streetlamp playing on her features. Chelseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08279604060499054571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-37998492596128338002013-02-05T09:04:40.544-08:002013-02-05T09:04:40.544-08:00This is a great scene. Very emotionally and sensua...This is a great scene. Very emotionally and sensually descriptive, not to mention hot! "Kissing Jesse had been nothing like this." That's a great line, and sums up everything she's doing and feeling so simply. Good luck!<br /><br />Maggie #27Maggie Younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04113071700468244512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-58953075957130500902013-02-05T06:35:32.054-08:002013-02-05T06:35:32.054-08:00I think this is a really moving scene, and the des...I think this is a really moving scene, and the descriptions within are very emotional and beautiful. They make a cute couple!<br /><br />Virginia #7Virginia Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588698042858650140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-13914826159599028842013-02-04T22:15:37.109-08:002013-02-04T22:15:37.109-08:00No worries on on a same sex kiss - the focus shoul...No worries on on a same sex kiss - the focus should be on two PEOPLE and the desire they feel for each other, and that is what you have here...especially with this line: "With her head thrown back, her throat was long and white and I was overcome with a sudden desire to touch it." This was simple and perfect and sexy and needed no gender orientation. <br />Nice Job!<br />Melonie (#29)Meloniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06816058375245712743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-18893020340419689292013-02-04T21:42:01.841-08:002013-02-04T21:42:01.841-08:00I've always loved this book! Good luck in the ...I've always loved this book! Good luck in the contest! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-28133244059142194952013-02-04T19:23:52.008-08:002013-02-04T19:23:52.008-08:00Glad you all liked it! It's always a little n...Glad you all liked it! It's always a little nerve-wracking to enter a same-sex kiss in a kissing contest!Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-86489905589484434622013-02-04T19:23:04.839-08:002013-02-04T19:23:04.839-08:00Yes, Jesse was a guy. Livvie's friends keep p...Yes, Jesse was a guy. Livvie's friends keep pushing her to go on awful blind dates with boys, but she's just not interested....Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-78824398646982255792013-02-04T19:22:21.118-08:002013-02-04T19:22:21.118-08:00Awww... Thanks so much!Awww... Thanks so much!Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-45860900039636190532013-02-04T19:16:14.105-08:002013-02-04T19:16:14.105-08:00Hi! I am one of Cupid's judges and I am coming...Hi! I am one of Cupid's judges and I am coming by to bestow upon you my CUTEST COUPLE AWARD.<br /><br />Now, to be honest, most of this couple's cuteness came through when I read the synopsis and got a clearer idea of the story. But the way Livvie is opening up to her for the first time was absolutely awesome. <br /><br />Great job, and I hope you have many more tremendous successes on your journey! :DKelsNotChelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08589509934771708353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-26392387420099464172013-02-04T17:34:14.357-08:002013-02-04T17:34:14.357-08:00Loved this scene. I think it perfectly captures th...Loved this scene. I think it perfectly captures the thrill and tension in investigating something desired but considered (even if just personally) taboo. I did pause to wonder whether Jesse was male or female, though I guess the female name would be spelled Jessie. Great job! --Saybe (Kissing Scene #23)Seabrookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09400079400485962650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-4305553929325416652013-02-04T17:17:04.178-08:002013-02-04T17:17:04.178-08:00I love the little details that draw me to the imme...I love the little details that draw me to the immediacy of the scene. The sodium lights, sour wine taste ... and the passion/guilt tension is perfect!Carissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10594436685900756259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-35812869581125837532013-02-04T14:57:10.304-08:002013-02-04T14:57:10.304-08:00I think the way you tracked the conflicting emotio...I think the way you tracked the conflicting emotions, guilt and desire, was terrific. My favorite line is "nerves I’d never noticed before singing songs of ecstasy along my spine". Hot kiss, softened by a very sweet last line.<br />--Barb (#38)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-24145134672152962932013-02-04T13:27:31.683-08:002013-02-04T13:27:31.683-08:00Love this line, "Time held no meaning. It co...Love this line, "Time held no meaning. It could have been seconds or forever before I drew back," as well as the rest of the paragraph that follows. Love the inner battle between what she wants and what she thinks is right. Good luck in the contest! --Amy (#5)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14370905964733084767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-35794626477409380542013-02-04T12:43:25.157-08:002013-02-04T12:43:25.157-08:00Had to go read what TBP is about. Definitely sound...Had to go read what TBP is about. Definitely sounds like something I'd read. I like your last line. She's obviously struggling between wanting to do it and feeing it's wrong. But it just kinda wraps up the scene. And she ends up feeling good.<br /><br />Does she struggle with her feelings after this still, or does she accept it, believing that it's okay.Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.com