tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post3448685854643978566..comments2024-03-28T04:07:58.140-07:00Comments on Fiction and Film: Beginning, Middle and End Blogfest!!!Kate Larkindalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-50989804233364588702011-09-03T21:01:31.791-07:002011-09-03T21:01:31.791-07:00I'm putting in another vote for the last line:...I'm putting in another vote for the last line: it's beautiful and has this lovely resonance to it. :-) I will say that I'm curious to know how this all ties together because in my mind, the beginning, middle, and end all sound like they could belong to completely different stories---not a criticism, just my initial thought upon reading them.<br /><br />Anyhow, this is a creative twist on the old "first 250 words" thing, so thanks for putting it together!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-13873322378016225922011-09-02T14:11:46.443-07:002011-09-02T14:11:46.443-07:00I really like your writing style, and I love findi...I really like your writing style, and I love finding other writers who use the present tense (even if it seems a lot more common nowadays than when I started doing it back in '93). I really, really like the ending line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-6187912310398280912011-09-02T11:29:49.364-07:002011-09-02T11:29:49.364-07:00I like the beginning - such a good hook! And I lik...I like the beginning - such a good hook! And I like the visual of the shadows cutting through a path through the moonlight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-59880749598800638722011-09-01T19:00:58.466-07:002011-09-01T19:00:58.466-07:00LOVE this book :D
LOVELOVE this book :D<br />LOVEJolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-69688133652661024152011-09-01T12:43:28.370-07:002011-09-01T12:43:28.370-07:00Beautiful last line!
I'm a new follower. Sorr...Beautiful last line!<br /><br />I'm a new follower. Sorry I missed the blogfest--would have loved to participate!Heidi Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15056627400336997554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-91461335812767046062011-09-01T12:07:49.173-07:002011-09-01T12:07:49.173-07:00On your blog!
Then come back on Saturday to tell ...On your blog!<br /><br />Then come back on Saturday to tell us who's you like the best.Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-27153564968498695242011-09-01T05:51:07.670-07:002011-09-01T05:51:07.670-07:00Kate, I signed up, but I'm feeling kind of den...Kate, I signed up, but I'm feeling kind of dense. Am I supposed to post these on my own blog? Or in comments on your blog?Gail Shepherdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16998497900316232330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-62426508024165300722011-08-31T20:41:29.969-07:002011-08-31T20:41:29.969-07:00I especially like the line, "Half-buried pens...I especially like the line, "Half-buried pens poke their noses out from under several precarious piles of paper." Kind of a tongue twister, isn't it? :)<br /><br />Good writing, although I admit there wasn't enough info in these three paragraphs to tell me what your novel is really about. I need to see a synopsis!Terron Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03508184587009172827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-70978121770075114732011-08-31T19:28:34.213-07:002011-08-31T19:28:34.213-07:00Very mysterious. Definitely hooked me and I want t...Very mysterious. Definitely hooked me and I want to read the rest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-37817564296023987802011-08-31T19:11:07.056-07:002011-08-31T19:11:07.056-07:00I love the last line too!I love the last line too!Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-17203515083266085792011-08-31T18:51:53.478-07:002011-08-31T18:51:53.478-07:00I love that last line! Everyone has such good entr...I love that last line! Everyone has such good entries. Thanks for hosting!Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-69465799695999131262011-08-31T14:19:55.328-07:002011-08-31T14:19:55.328-07:00I'm especially in love with that final sentenc...I'm especially in love with that final sentence! Gorgeous!Kristin Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16112300139571487439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-27870730412889141562011-08-31T04:14:35.004-07:002011-08-31T04:14:35.004-07:00Yeah, that woman in the office reminds me of someo...Yeah, that woman in the office reminds me of someone. =) Nice snippet.E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.com