tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post1561924853201767713..comments2024-03-28T04:07:58.140-07:00Comments on Fiction and Film: Lovin' The LanguageKate Larkindalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-91880328040177864362011-06-28T06:19:42.231-07:002011-06-28T06:19:42.231-07:00Lovin' #2 and #4 especially, but these were al...Lovin' #2 and #4 especially, but these were all fabulous excerpts!<br /><i>I reach up my hand, expecting to feel letters embossed on my flesh</i><br />Chills!Briannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581532070734685757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-72643612136192140792011-06-27T18:08:46.462-07:002011-06-27T18:08:46.462-07:00I can really feel the chill of this story - great ...I can really feel the chill of this story - great description!Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-57072114226790320832011-06-27T14:41:45.605-07:002011-06-27T14:41:45.605-07:00I really liked 4 and 5...makes me want to keep rea...I really liked 4 and 5...makes me want to keep reading!<br /><br /><a href="http://thewritesoil.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">The Write Soil</a>Dawn M. Hamsherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17782257750640888264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-59080756069823663592011-06-27T14:10:34.472-07:002011-06-27T14:10:34.472-07:00WOW! I loved all of them- great imagery!WOW! I loved all of them- great imagery!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-554483263544156012011-06-27T12:52:13.353-07:002011-06-27T12:52:13.353-07:00Well done, well done. Your writing is good. It'...Well done, well done. Your writing is good. It's clear and filled with imagery. Beautiful.Small Town Shelly Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13535247595352753415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-26907166969972404772011-06-27T12:32:44.489-07:002011-06-27T12:32:44.489-07:00I like #4. Great job.I like #4. Great job.Tamara Hart Heinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07562765111202443160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-66679621771100911322011-06-27T09:31:59.003-07:002011-06-27T09:31:59.003-07:00Love that last snippet. I'm a cold person too,...Love that last snippet. I'm a cold person too, so I totally understood the still shivering line.Kayeleen Hamblinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07652280450104899423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-53338992499981974802011-06-27T09:16:41.189-07:002011-06-27T09:16:41.189-07:00FAB! Though, after reading your last blogfest entr...FAB! Though, after reading your last blogfest entry, I expected nothing less ;DJolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-70062427109637471152011-06-27T08:45:02.478-07:002011-06-27T08:45:02.478-07:00I really like number four. Thanks for sharing thes...I really like number four. Thanks for sharing these, I love seeing what parts of their writing writers love best!Shalleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09907680428735740943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-84594409889267275822011-06-27T08:20:38.184-07:002011-06-27T08:20:38.184-07:00These are fantastic! #2 and #5 are my favorites. T...These are fantastic! #2 and #5 are my favorites. Thanks for sharing :DJordan McCollumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16523599384793856702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-3732517343220830152011-06-27T07:46:51.856-07:002011-06-27T07:46:51.856-07:00I wanted to stop back by here because I wasn't...I wanted to stop back by here because I wasn't sure if you'd go to YAtopia again. I just wanted to say it's funny that you said you wanted to read DIZZY because Jolene (co-author) and I were JUST emailing the other day about how we wanted to read Chasing the Tail lights after reading that kiss scene. LOLKelley Vitollohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13304868437913885003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-77123341191950415842011-06-27T04:36:52.867-07:002011-06-27T04:36:52.867-07:00I really feel #4...think I've done that to my ...I really feel #4...think I've done that to my daughter once or twice!Vicki Rochohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07381089434014961076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-56262526394699820882011-06-27T01:57:48.380-07:002011-06-27T01:57:48.380-07:00These are all great - but number 2 is terrific. :)...These are all great - but number 2 is terrific. :)Chronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-51156906887746211892011-06-26T21:49:52.515-07:002011-06-26T21:49:52.515-07:00Wow. Those are incredible. You have a way with wor...Wow. Those are incredible. You have a way with words that sucks you in. Loved them all.Kelley Vitollohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13304868437913885003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-22822018757778416032011-06-26T20:11:26.832-07:002011-06-26T20:11:26.832-07:00I loved no. 5. I can imagine feeling those vibes ...I loved no. 5. I can imagine feeling those vibes from someone who's angry.Louisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01941582936222540090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-11157057003497000602011-06-26T20:02:57.844-07:002011-06-26T20:02:57.844-07:00Numbers 3 and 4 are fantastic but all of them, rea...Numbers 3 and 4 are fantastic but all of them, really, are well done. I agree you get a strong sense of character in such a small span of time/space.M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-51401508592142767722011-06-26T13:37:21.387-07:002011-06-26T13:37:21.387-07:00OH, I love number four. There is such a strong sen...OH, I love number four. There is such a strong sense of who both people are - the mom and the child - in just a few sentences. That, in my opinion, equals TALENTAlison DeLucahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06979026382091362305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363187649278189370.post-82261324004868272902011-06-26T12:41:16.290-07:002011-06-26T12:41:16.290-07:00Such a strong sense of character, even if she does...Such a strong sense of character, even if she does seem a little neurotic (but then, I think we all are a bit) Loved snippets 3 and 4 the most - who hasn't been through those things themself?Spanjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13893837904669368614noreply@blogger.com